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Wildflower – JH Mancy

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  • in Australia · Wild competition
  • — 31 Jan, 2015 at 9:00 am

Wildflower

JH Mancy

Tallebudgera, Queensland

Australia

 

Wild Competition Entry

Beauty can be found in the most unexpected places. Like the neglected building site I regularly pass on my way to somewhere else.

Old bricks and roofing iron lie on the ground in haphazard piles. Remnants of an ancient chimney rest forlornly, awaiting rebirth.

Un-mown grass and weeds struggle against the elements, whilst providing tenuous shelter for small creatures, intent on remaining invisible to other, bigger creatures. Who, ever vigilant, watch and listen for the slightest timorous sound of movement which will enable them to hone in on their next meal. An elusive smorgasbord of take-away delights.

Surrounding this hodgepodge of habitation is a derelict weldmesh fence, badly in need of repair.

As a human creature I am discouraged by law from venturing in to this urban wilderness. The padlocked gate has no great deterrent value however. It leans inward, its frame supported by a half quota of loose screws in rusting hinges. The remaining screws lie neglected on half-baked earth.

A lone vine, tendril reaching ever higher, snakes its way to the top as if seeking to free itself from the imprisoning gate. There, at the very pinnacle, blooms a single flower. Majestic in purple splendour, quietly it shouts a message.

‘I have arrived!’

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17 Comments

  1. djnewman says:
    January 31, 2015 at 9:51 am

    A sense of freedom from within the confines, something most of us seek. One possible interpretation of this piece. I am sure that there are many others, but that’s the one I like most. Well done Jan.

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    • JHMancy says:
      February 1, 2015 at 11:13 am

      Thanks so much David. Your comments are always encouraging. It has been suggested by a couple of people that this piece is incomplete… I did think about adding to it, but decided to leave it open to interpretation…. I would be more than happy if anyone would like to take up the challenge to expand on it. Anyone?

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      • djnewman says:
        February 7, 2015 at 10:25 pm

        It is yours alone to expand on or not Jan. Perhaps rather than expanding on it though, comes the right time you could use it or some part of it to expand on one of your future works. Instead of trying to put a singular interpretation on it, use it as an interpretation in itself for a larger work.

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        • JHMancy says:
          February 9, 2015 at 4:26 pm

          Thanks David… I’ve considered doing that. Hmmmm… I might put it on the back burner for a while like Mum’s tea (an acquired taste!) Jan

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  2. judy iliffe says:
    February 1, 2015 at 4:52 am

    Love it Janet

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    • JHMancy says:
      February 2, 2015 at 8:06 pm

      Thank you Judy

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  3. Ruth says:
    February 2, 2015 at 11:41 am

    I love the simple beauty of this piece, Jan. While it no doubt could be expanded on, I think it stands eloquently alone.

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    • JHMancy says:
      February 2, 2015 at 8:08 pm

      Thank you for your lovely comments and feedback Ruth… always welcome.

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  4. robalone says:
    February 3, 2015 at 3:44 pm

    At last I have had a chance to look in. I love this piece just as it ids Jan … the reminiscing of all the unexpected beauty we so often miss in the world, which then catches us again by surprise when we remember to stop a moment and actually look about us. Beautiful!

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    • Jan M says:
      February 4, 2015 at 9:21 am

      Thanks Rob. I love to step out in nature, ‘discovering’ little pockets of beauty to marvel at… better than any medicine. It IS medicine 🙂

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    • JHMancy says:
      February 4, 2015 at 9:33 am

      Take two (I forgot to log in… sound familiar!) Thanks for your comments Rob. I appreciate the encouraging feedback. Walking has its advantages, and as I walk almost everywhere I have ‘discovered’ many hidden delights… better than any medicine. It IS medicine!

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  5. Mellie says:
    February 3, 2015 at 5:00 pm

    Poet stops to smell the roses 🙂

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    • JHMancy says:
      February 4, 2015 at 9:23 am

      So invigorating 🙂 Thanks Mellie.

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  6. Arturo says:
    February 9, 2015 at 9:01 pm

    I have a sense of nature reclaiming the Earth and there is a primordial beauty to that. It’s a timely reminder that we human beings are still capable or wracking havoc on the environment, but that ultimately the environment will exact retribution.

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  7. JHMancy says:
    February 10, 2015 at 7:43 am

    Thank you Arturo. Yes, it’s unfortunate that these beautiful, ‘introduced’ plant species can wreak such havoc in our environment to the detriment of our own natives. I came across a lovely flowering vine recently. It was growing on someone’s fence… It is called Dutchman’s Pipe and it hails from South America. It is deadly to the rare subtropical Richmond Birdwing Butterfly of Queensland. The butterflies mistake it for a similar Australian plant and lay there eggs on it.

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  8. A A Anderson says:
    June 28, 2015 at 7:04 pm

    It’s is so beautiful and very descriptive.

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    • JHMancy says:
      June 29, 2015 at 10:04 am

      Thank you AA. I am surprised to see a comment on this piece after all this time! Glad you like it. Cheers!

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