Over The Top 1918 – Terry Hopper
3Over The Top 1918
Terry Hopper
Luton, Bedfordshire
UK
The silence before, a cough and a yawn
The dew on the duckboards, the calm before the storm,
The sleeping lay hushed, not a sound nor a snore
The rats are a-scurry, before the Howitzers roar
Stench of the dead, strewn scattered limbs,
Prayers to angels, soft murmur of hymns,
Confessions a bounty, tears mellow and fall
Ladders are ready, the bugler calls
The whistles are blowing, the calling to arms
Last draw on the cigarette, kiss lucky charms
Over the top, bayonets fixed
No turning back now, the boxes are ticked
Mud and fox holes, shells passing me by
Standing but falling, as hard as I try
A burning sensation, smoke in my eyes,
Best friends and comrades slaughtered by lies.
Bio: Terry calls this: The final moments before the young boys go over the top of the trenches at the Somme in 1918.
A very powerful and thoughtful piece. Terry, a small suggestion if I may… if you were to shorten the second sentence a little it would improve flow. Perhaps lose a couple of ‘the’ (s)? (I hope you don’t mind me saying this.) I enjoy your work very much and hope to see more of it. Beautiful.
Dark, foreboding, incredible! Beautiful? no! As always, Terry, your message rings out loud and strong.
Thoughtful and thought-provoking! Sentiments strongly expressed. The tragedy of war and the futility of lives lost. All these things are very much on our minds at present and you have expressed these sentiments so well, Terry.