Goodbye To narrator – Demelza
17Goodbye To narrator
Demelza
Taroona, Tasmania
Australia
Goodbye to narrator
Cheerio see you later
Your presence will stay in my mind
Your lay was out good—your manners as should
And comments were always so kind
But alas I’ve been tight
In supporting your site
The monies just didn’t come in
I’ve guilt like a barb—I hope you don’t starve
Because of my horrible sin
Thanks for the edited
Yes! There now I’ve said it
I’ve learnt such a lot from this site
So receive my confessings with millions of blessings
I hope you’ll continue to write
Goodbye my dear friends
Keep hold of your pens
Perhaps we can still be in touch
Right now I have grief with high unbelief
And think I have written much
Bio: Demelza has nothing more to say but hopes her poem says it for her.
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Wonderful poem, yes we will all certainly miss Narrator. I will also miss your lovely writing Demelza.
thank you AA Anderson
Goodbye, farewell, see ya, cheerio, ta ta, hooroo.
It’s still seems so sad no matter how it is said.
All of us with Narrator International will miss you;
until we can find a new way to say Hello instead:
thanks David I agree
goodby Demelza
will miss your scribblings.
hope to see you at the party.
but otherwise,
I get to Tas occasionally as my sister lives at Collinsvale,and would be able to have a coffee with you.
my email adress for any one interested is
sparks-micro@hotmail.com.
Looking forward to seeing you Graham in Tassie – won’t be able to make it to the Blue Mountains-very sad about that 🙁
whoops last line should read
I think I have said too much
Fairwell to Narrator and everyone involved. It’s been such an amazing privilege to be able to be apart of it. And i’m forever grateful. Thanks a bunch!!!
toe tell lee agree with you Adrian- it has been a privilege.
N ot one to be too sentimental…but…
A t times like this – we must be gentle.
R emember all the fantastic writing on this site,
R ecall all the wisdom (?) be it wrong or right!
A ll glories to Jenny, Ally and Sarah,
T o all other writers – may you always bear a(n)…
O bligation to these three who helped you along,
R espectfully, I say join in the song – of praise.
hear hear to that one James!
What a lovely cheery poem. A shame you can’t make it to the party Demelza.You’ll be missed!
Hopefully it may be the first of many ‘reunions’.
That was beautiful Demelza! I’ve loved reading your poems and ‘knowing’ you through them. Thank you for your support of Narrator.
Thanks Ally for all your support – it has been a wonderful experience and a springboard for confidence in our written abilities.
A lovely poem and very fitting Demelza.
thank you Robalone – I think I am having NI withdrawals as I still tend to want to check this site each day.